Place and Time Workship

Brandon:

Brandon wrote in a short story style about the time he went to Mexico with his family and became more exposed to the hispanic culture. I really enjoyed the inclusion of Spanish phrases and words. There weren't really any problems that didn't work.

The only thing that needs to be done is reading through it for grammatical errors and

Takaia:

Takaia wrote in a personal essay style about how she would often move with her family throughout her life and the affect it had on her. I really like how she had a lot of dialogue in her essay. She really did a great job and I don't have to much to suggest except to Finnish it up in the name way that she has been writing.